So this is my first try at a songfiction! Its Perfect, by P!nk, and this is for all those Lalia/Thuke fans out there! Constructive critism is appreciated:D
PERFECT
(THALIA'S POV)
I walked into the Artemis cabin, tired from a long game of capture the flag. I was going to go to bed when I noticed a packgage sitting on my bed. In neatly written cursive, it had the name Thalia on it. Curious, I opened it and found an Ipod in it. I put in the earphones and started listening,
Dear Thalia, I know that by the time you will be reading this, I will be long gone, but, the feelings are still there, so please....just listen to this for me...
Made a wrong turn, once or twice
The song paused and I gasped as I heard luke's voice.
When I was leading you and Annabeth to camp, I led you both into so many traps
Dug my way out of blood and fire
As fun as it was being on the runn with the two of you, we had practically escaped every possible monster...
Bad decsions, thats all right
I know it was wrong to give myself over to Kronos, but...
Welcome to my silly life
Honestly, do the Gods really expect us to lead a normal life? We're fricken demigods for Zeus' sake!
mistreated, misplaced, misunderstood
Iv'e always been treated horribly, take for granet, never taken seriously, and I am just so done with it!
"Miss, no-way-its-all-good"
but yet, whenever you come everyone relaxes a little, knowing that you've got everything under control
It didn't slow me down
When you were a tree, it was hard to keep going, but somehow i managed...barely
Mistaken, always secong guessing, underestimated, look im still around
Being a son of Hermes is hard, nobody takes me seriosly, nobody thinks that I can do anything, besides steal things, but I can do soo much more than that...
Pretty Pretty Please,
Dont you ever, ever feel,
Like your less than,
Less than Perfect
Thalia Grace, Daughter of Zeus, Lieutenant of Artemis, you are perfect
Pretty Pretty Please,
Don't you ever ever feel,
Like your nothing,
You are perfect, to me-
This honestly may mean nothing to you, but you are perfect
your so mean, when you talk, about yourself, you are wrong
Honestly, Thals, you put yourself at such low standards, but when are you going to accept that your pefrect?
change the voices, in your head, and make them like you instead
Again, you doubt yourself too much! YOU ARE PERFECT!
So complicated
Why does our relationship have to be so complicated
Look how big you'll make it
Your an immortal daughter of Zeus, you'll go down in history
Filled with so much hatred, such a tired game
I used to have so much hatred towards the gods, and I was just so sick of doing their dirty work, and not getting anything in return!
It's enough, iv'e done all I could think of
I was so sick of it I resorted to my lst option, which I'm not proud of...
Chased down all my demons
Personally, I think I made the right choice sacrificing myself for the gods...
I'll see you do the same
Thalia, please listen to me! I know Gaea is starting to rise! She will come after the most powerful half bloods, which means that she will come after you; as hypocrytical as this may sound, just say no...don't give in, no matter what she tempts you with, say no, please...for me?
Pretty Pretty please,
Don't you ever, ever feel,
Like your less than,
Less than perfect
It hasn't changed, you are still, and always will be perfect
Pretty Pretty please,
If you ever ever feel,
Like your nothing,
You are perfect, to me-
No matter what anyone says, to me, you will always be perfect.
Luke's voice paused, then said,
I know this won't mean much to you, Thals, but...I love you
The music stopped and Luke's voice was gone, I tear dripped down my face. This was the Luke I knew. This was the real him. This was the Luke that I loved.
PERFECT
(THALIA'S POV)
I walked into the Artemis cabin, tired from a long game of capture the flag. I was going to go to bed when I noticed a packgage sitting on my bed. In neatly written cursive, it had the name Thalia on it. Curious, I opened it and found an Ipod in it. I put in the earphones and started listening,
Dear Thalia, I know that by the time you will be reading this, I will be long gone, but, the feelings are still there, so please....just listen to this for me...
Made a wrong turn, once or twice
The song paused and I gasped as I heard luke's voice.
When I was leading you and Annabeth to camp, I led you both into so many traps
Dug my way out of blood and fire
As fun as it was being on the runn with the two of you, we had practically escaped every possible monster...
Bad decsions, thats all right
I know it was wrong to give myself over to Kronos, but...
Welcome to my silly life
Honestly, do the Gods really expect us to lead a normal life? We're fricken demigods for Zeus' sake!
mistreated, misplaced, misunderstood
Iv'e always been treated horribly, take for granet, never taken seriously, and I am just so done with it!
"Miss, no-way-its-all-good"
but yet, whenever you come everyone relaxes a little, knowing that you've got everything under control
It didn't slow me down
When you were a tree, it was hard to keep going, but somehow i managed...barely
Mistaken, always secong guessing, underestimated, look im still around
Being a son of Hermes is hard, nobody takes me seriosly, nobody thinks that I can do anything, besides steal things, but I can do soo much more than that...
Pretty Pretty Please,
Dont you ever, ever feel,
Like your less than,
Less than Perfect
Thalia Grace, Daughter of Zeus, Lieutenant of Artemis, you are perfect
Pretty Pretty Please,
Don't you ever ever feel,
Like your nothing,
You are perfect, to me-
This honestly may mean nothing to you, but you are perfect
your so mean, when you talk, about yourself, you are wrong
Honestly, Thals, you put yourself at such low standards, but when are you going to accept that your pefrect?
change the voices, in your head, and make them like you instead
Again, you doubt yourself too much! YOU ARE PERFECT!
So complicated
Why does our relationship have to be so complicated
Look how big you'll make it
Your an immortal daughter of Zeus, you'll go down in history
Filled with so much hatred, such a tired game
I used to have so much hatred towards the gods, and I was just so sick of doing their dirty work, and not getting anything in return!
It's enough, iv'e done all I could think of
I was so sick of it I resorted to my lst option, which I'm not proud of...
Chased down all my demons
Personally, I think I made the right choice sacrificing myself for the gods...
I'll see you do the same
Thalia, please listen to me! I know Gaea is starting to rise! She will come after the most powerful half bloods, which means that she will come after you; as hypocrytical as this may sound, just say no...don't give in, no matter what she tempts you with, say no, please...for me?
Pretty Pretty please,
Don't you ever, ever feel,
Like your less than,
Less than perfect
It hasn't changed, you are still, and always will be perfect
Pretty Pretty please,
If you ever ever feel,
Like your nothing,
You are perfect, to me-
No matter what anyone says, to me, you will always be perfect.
Luke's voice paused, then said,
I know this won't mean much to you, Thals, but...I love you
The music stopped and Luke's voice was gone, I tear dripped down my face. This was the Luke I knew. This was the real him. This was the Luke that I loved.
Hello this is my first fanfic so go easy on me lol okay well here it goes comment please for feedback
Chapter 1
The Eternal City
I felt cold, it was dark, and i was underwater i
thought wait how can i be underwater for so long then i saw something above the water it look like some kinda dog thing i didn't know what to expect so i went up to the water and saw a wolf then the wolf spoke to me but didn't open her mouth she said "Who are you" i was about to respond normally but i couldn't honestly remember i said to the wolf "i don't know where and i" "your in the eternal city but i don't see how you got in here this city has great defensive wall around it and guards all around" then out of know where an arrow shot straight for my face and i dodged it at the last second and said to the wolf "tell the guards to stop" "No you prove your worth here" then out of nowhere i hear a loud growling sound
Chapter 1
The Eternal City
I felt cold, it was dark, and i was underwater i
thought wait how can i be underwater for so long then i saw something above the water it look like some kinda dog thing i didn't know what to expect so i went up to the water and saw a wolf then the wolf spoke to me but didn't open her mouth she said "Who are you" i was about to respond normally but i couldn't honestly remember i said to the wolf "i don't know where and i" "your in the eternal city but i don't see how you got in here this city has great defensive wall around it and guards all around" then out of know where an arrow shot straight for my face and i dodged it at the last second and said to the wolf "tell the guards to stop" "No you prove your worth here" then out of nowhere i hear a loud growling sound
Hellllllllooooooo!
JosephineSilver here. As some of you may know, at the moment I have 3 forums going - and they are awesome. Anyway, here are some things that you can expect from me in 2012:
The Final War Trilogy
Okay, this will be the sequel series to my version of the Heroes of Olympus, called Camp Half-Blood's Blogs. It will be out sometime in November.
The Olympian Challenge!
Big brother meets HoO. Can read the first chapter now on my forum of Epic Randomness.
12 things we mmost definitely shouldn't have done.
This will be a forum, based on Ten things I shouldn't have done, a hilarious book I'm reading.
That's all for now.
See ya, wouldn't wanna be ya!
JosephineSilver here. As some of you may know, at the moment I have 3 forums going - and they are awesome. Anyway, here are some things that you can expect from me in 2012:
The Final War Trilogy
Okay, this will be the sequel series to my version of the Heroes of Olympus, called Camp Half-Blood's Blogs. It will be out sometime in November.
The Olympian Challenge!
Big brother meets HoO. Can read the first chapter now on my forum of Epic Randomness.
12 things we mmost definitely shouldn't have done.
This will be a forum, based on Ten things I shouldn't have done, a hilarious book I'm reading.
That's all for now.
See ya, wouldn't wanna be ya!
i have done too many as olympia. so this isnt in her view
Percy
Percy knew something wasn't right when Olympia dashed up to him .She threw herself at him, screaming ''Percy listen to me! Tartarus is starting a revolution and he has god killing bombs and-''she faltered,overwhelmed by the sudden shock of it.Percy watched as she stumbled, and tore into the lake, past Zeus's Fist ( Aka Poop Pile) and climbed up a tree , Percy knew he should probably tell Chiron, but not now, now he had to tell Annabeth,it was kinda tradition. So, he ran in to the Athena cabin, pulled her aside and told it all.
Percy
Percy knew something wasn't right when Olympia dashed up to him .She threw herself at him, screaming ''Percy listen to me! Tartarus is starting a revolution and he has god killing bombs and-''she faltered,overwhelmed by the sudden shock of it.Percy watched as she stumbled, and tore into the lake, past Zeus's Fist ( Aka Poop Pile) and climbed up a tree , Percy knew he should probably tell Chiron, but not now, now he had to tell Annabeth,it was kinda tradition. So, he ran in to the Athena cabin, pulled her aside and told it all.