coolios and why did they have to say 2 weeks not 1?! uh ok good luck!

:) haha I know nearly everyone has already finished the book including me

Okay since I can't stand waiting for two weeks I'm gonna be writing the chapters up in my notebook instead of posting them straight up from scratch and it will also mean that I'll post more :)

It's decided I'm not waiting for the two week mark I can't help it I'll post it tomorrow afternoon just finished writing it then.

Cool can't wait :)

POST SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOON!
u told me ur chapters are short
im here to investigate
lol im sure itll be awesome
post soon!

Lol nicecatch posting the chapter right now hope you enjoy first chapter everyone.
Chapter 1: Percy pov
Percy, frank and hazel made their way over towards the big ship where his camp half blood friends made there way over to them.
Percy spotted annabeth next to a girl with brown hair and chocolate brown eyes.
"annabeth", yelled Percy.
"Percy I missed you so much", annabeth said racing up to me giving me a kiss. *cough cough*.
"oh annabeth this is Frank and Hazel".
"hello"."nice to meet you I'm annabeth percy's girlfriend and daughter of Athena".
"nice to meet you to", Hazel said smiling.
"where did Frank go?".
"umm no idea he was here a minute ago wasn't he?".
"yes he was". *sqeuk*. "what was that?". "Frank".
"I don't get it" "we'll explain later", Percy said.
Someone tapped Percy's shoulder and he turned around and saw Leo, the kid who looked like Hazel's friend Sammy who was with the girl Percy saw with Annabeth earlier and who he gathered was Jason Grace the leader of Camp Jupiter.
"hi your Percy right?".
"yes why?".
"we are new to Camp Half Blood well except Jason and we just wanted to talk to you like get to know you a bit more oh and by the way I'm Piper daughter of Aphrodite and this is Leo son of heuphusts and Jason as you would already know the son of Jupiter".
"Nice to meet you Piper, Leo and Jason", I smiled.
"you to".
These are my friends Hazel and Frank, who is somewhere".
"not trying to be rude or anything but who are your godly parents?".
"My father is Pluto and Frank's is mars", hazel smiled but gazed at Leo in a look of longing.
"hazel", Jason smiled. "Hi nice to see you again Jason".
"you to Hazel".
"annabeth is Grover here?".
"no but he is coming later with Thalia and mrs O Leary".
"okay but hang on isn't Thalia with the hunters?".
"She is that is why Grover is getting her seaweed brain".
"oh okay", I said a bit embarrased.
"I'm sorry to interupt your little reunion Jackson but Reyna has called a meeting to introduce the disgusting Greek's", Octavian spat.
"sure and has anyone seen Ella?".

See what i mean and this took up a whole page in my notebook.

that was awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
*except the percabeth* lol joking
And it wasn't short at all! You just made it look short. Maybe u could do paragraphs anddddd
When two people r having a conversation, space out the quotes:
e.g
"Hello Percy," said Annabeth coldly. (PRESS ENTER)
"Annabeth....I hate you!" replied Percy. (PRESS ENTER)
"Me too!" yelled Annabeth.

^lol
just space out the quotes
AWESOMMEEE CHAPIEEEEEE!
post soooooon!

oh, and if u want, u could type ur chappies and send them to me
i'll space it out and do boring grammar stuff and send it back to you
then you can post

Thanx and if you don't mind doing it because I know you've got two fanfics that you gotta write

Great job pb and nicecatch you do realize you made it look like annabeth hates herself right? *shakes head* and PB you write out your chapters cuz I just wing it well at least when I try

Not usually but I was bored and couldn't be bothered typing so I started writing it while listening to music

yeah, i can do it
i have already written most of my chapters, an this seems like an esy job

and unknownquestion *epic facepalm* Annabeth hates herself lol

Okay thank you so much you want me to send the chapters to you through the messages on fan pop.

Okay I'll probably upload over the weekend I was gonnauupload today but I got my soccer presentation

Good luck!:)

This chapter is dedicated to nicecatch42 and unknown question for commenting on my forum and also I'm gonna try and space it out well hope you enjoy next chapter

Chapter 2: annabeth pov
Annabeth was so excited when she saw Percy and even more so that he remembered her.
Now they were walking around camp Jupiter looking for Ella the harpy who they could not find anywhere.
"any sign of her Percy".
"no not at all but we ca t give up we need to find her I'm just hoping Octavian told Reyna to hold the welcoming for a bit".
"well we just have explain to Reyna if he didn't tell her".
"yea okay, come on let's go see if the others had any luck".
"okay coming".
When they met back up with the others the asked if they had any luck but they hadn't so they continued their search, but what annabeth couldn't figure out was why Ella was so important and why the needed to find her.
Annabeth turned around and heard a thump.
The little rat that had been following them was now a Chinese, Canadian kid who was bulky, had short black hair and his face looked a little babyish.
"Frank what happened you were a rat?".
"umm I don't exactly know to be honest just that one minute I was human next minute I'm a rat and couldn't get out of that form till now".
Percy laughed.
"well know Frank you can help us find Ella".
"sure".
"oh and this is my girlfriend Annabeth Chase daughter of Athena".
"Hi I'm Frank Zhang son of Mars".
"nice to meet you Frank and also you say his name as though you hate him".
"I don't hate him I just wish I wasn't a son of Mars that's all".
"wow I've never met someone who's father is ares and doesn't want to be their child take clarrisse for example".
"May I ask who this clarrisse is and Ares is Mars Greek equivalent right".
"yes it is and clarrisse is a daughter of Ares and worst enemy of Percy".
"oh I see".
"Guys enough of the chit chat we have to find Ella".
"oh right sorry seaweed brain".
"that's alright wise girl".

How was that?

Lol I liked the part when frank was stuck as a rat:) anyway hope you post soon how did it go at the soccer game?

nice but percy considers clarise a friend in the books

that was nice! and you spaced it out perfectly!

go to The Fanfic forum page
we made a combined MOA
so POST!
post soon!

I liked it. Especially the rat part

Thanks for the comments and Nemesis that was a mistake and unknownquestion it was my soccer presentation we finished our season already and lol it was embarrassing my team was the first called up to get our trophies then of course I was the first to be called up from my team.

Okay so I've decided to have a posting schedule because I'm busy a lot so the only days I can post are Monday, Friday and Sunday so expect an upload on one of those days.

please post soon!

Just read it all and it was quite good

Hello everyone thank you for the comments and I'm posting right now hope you enjoy :)
Chapter 3: Octavian
Octavian sighed he hated those greeks and everybody may think that Octavian hated them just because he was staying faithful to the Romans but it wasn't just that he thought back to when he was 3.
flashback
He was walking alone to the park like he did everyday, the park had basically been his home since he ran away from his mother who was a drunk and hated him with all her might.
He trembled at just the thought of her.
She had long, straight, blonde hair and chocolate brown eyes, she had a few freckles an was very tan but was very scary looking.
His mother came from Greece but she moved to New York and attended a camp there then she decided to move to San fransico where she fell in love with Apollo.
Octavian snapped out of his thoughts when he heard a boy behind him.
"Hello why are you homeless", he said with a laugh.
"How do you know?"
"I know more than you think Octavian".
"I don't get it you know I'm homeless and you know my name".
"Yes I've been watching you".
"Your a stalker", he yelled.
"No I'm not a stalker I used to be friends with your mother before she started drinking".
"Oh".
"Now to the point why I am her".
"Yes go on". "Well I've come hear to destroy you before you turn out like your mother a alcoholic".
"Wh-Wh-What do you mean you've come to destroy me?"
"You'll find out", he said pulling a sword out of his pocket".
Octavian whimpered.
The boy grabbed hold of his neck and put the sword to his throught.
"If you move your dead".
"You'll do no such thing to the boy Gary", a wolf came running over and fought him off. When he was gone she introduced herself.
"Hello I'm lupa and I'm going to take you to a place called the wolf house to train your powers".
That is why Octavian hated the Greeks so much.

Hope you enjoy it and I've just got to edit it so it may not be the easiest thing to read :)

Really thats why he hates them.Good chapter

Well I wanted to make his background life interesting since RR never mentioned his past I decided I'd make it up and well him hating the Greeks I just couldnt help myself.

great chapter please post

im sorry to be criticle but octavan was a desendent of apollo not a son

Whoops I'll change it if I can get on the computer

Okay here is the next chapter finally and I really appreciate all your comments this is my most commented forum I've got so congratulations guys and again I really appreciate it well anyway this chapter is dedicated to @swimmergirl7 for commenting a lot thank you :)
@nicecatch42 sorry I didn't dedicate this to you as well but I've already dedicated a chapter to you but thankyouu for commenting anyway it makes my day :)

Chapter 4: Jason
Jason really didn't get why it was so important to find Ella behcause she was just a harpy or was she?
Millions of questions ran through Jason's mind, where was Ella, why was she so important, was she a friend of Percy but Dudley Percy wouldn't be friends with a harpy but you never know Percy may be it just puzzled Jason.
"Jason I hear something".
Jason snapped back to reality and looked at Piper who was standing next to Hazel.
"What do you think it is?"
"Wouldn't know hang is that a net up in that tree?"
"Yes but why would a net be in a tree?"
"Well it doesn't matter let's just go check it out Jason, Piper".
"Alright".
When we reached the tree the net was holding Ella and some little boy who was pale and very skinny with a few freckles here and there, the boy also had long curly blonde hair that looked as though it had not been cut brushed or cleaned which it probably hadn't and his eyes were baby pink.
The boy looked very scared and fragile and he whimpered when I smiled encouragingly at him.
"Shh it's okay were going to get you both out", Hazel said.
"Yes friends get Ella and new friend out".
"No you can't you'll be killed it's a trap", the mystery boy said.
His voice was very croaky and you could tell that he needed water.
"What is your name", Piper said kindly.
"It's Nathanial Dean Taylor", he replied shyly.
"Okay Nathanial I need you to tell us why it's a trap because technically this is our territory I mean the Romans", I said softly not wanting to frighten him even more than he already was.
"That's the point they knew that there would be Roman Demigods coming in through these woods and used me and Ella as bait to get to you Demigods so if you even start cutting the net down you three will all be trapped to".
"Okay I get it and are you a Demigod Nathanial?"
"Yes son of Minerva".
"Ella have plan, Friends get other friends".
"Yea we will have to G-".
I was cut of by the muffled talking of something and I listened more carefully hoping I could catch some of what they were saying.
Hopefully those filthy Ronan Demigods will find our trap soon".
"They will have to or we will come and kill everyone from Camp Jupiter including that useless botpy Octavian".
"Wonderfull boss thins is going to be quite the joy maybe we should do this more often".
"Yes we should shouldn't we Mathew".
"yes but for now I think we should wait boss".
"Yes okay let the waiting begin".
"Piper Hazel did you here that there planning on attacking Camp Jupiter if they don't catch us".
"Yes we heard we need to go worn everyone and tell then prepare for battle".

Okay you should probably know that this isn't very active and this forum is on a club called the fanfic and that's where most of my activity is so yeah just letting you know.

post soon

Okay posting a sneak peak I wrote this in science while I was bored so yea hope you enjoy :)
Chapter 4: Nathanial pov
Nathanial was scared very scared not just for himself but for Camp Jupiter as well.
Even though I have never been to camp Jupiter I still watched over the camp though, the same as I have done since I was five and I'm now ten.
Your probably wondering why I don't go to Camp Jupiter well when I was three I got banned from Camp for something I didn't do and I've basically been here in the forest all my life so know here I am talking to three demigods and trapped with a harpy called Ella.
"Nathanial can you wait here I'll go and get my other friends to look after you while I warn everyone".
"Okay".