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Percy’s P.O.V
It’s been years since the giant war. I still remember it like it yesterday instead of 50 years ago. It was 50 years ago that I got turned into a vampire. When I defeated Gaea, a saw a red blur, it came closer and closer to me, asking what happened and if I was ok. I wasn’t, not by a long shot. After the 3 days were up I pretended that I was really dead, even though I wasn’t. My throat burned and I knew from my classes of mythology with Annabeth that the only way to get rid of it or at leads bring the burning sensation down. I didn’t want them to see me like this, so faked my death, sort of. I kept running until I stopped to hunt in forks Washington, at least that’s what the sign said. Anyway as I was hunting a herd of deer (because I don’t want to be a monster and feed on humans). Then I saw them, they called themselves the Cullen’s. They said that like me, they didn’t hunt humans. They offered for me to live with them, I accepted and now here I am, in my room in trying to get my niece Renesmee to sleep. She only ever sleeps when she with her dad, Edward Cullen, her mom (Bella Cullen) and of course me. When she finally went to sleep, I stared to think about who it was that bit me. I knew who it was after I told the Cullen’s; they said that it was one of the Volturi guards, they didn’t know who, but it was them. Then I started to think about my old life, and the people that I miss; my dad, my friends at camp, my mom but strangely the person I miss the most, I never thought I would. I hope I didn’t fall for her, her name is.........
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Percy’s P.O.V
It’s been years since the giant war. I still remember it like it yesterday instead of 50 years ago. It was 50 years ago that I got turned into a vampire. When I defeated Gaea, a saw a red blur, it came closer and closer to me, asking what happened and if I was ok. I wasn’t, not by a long shot. After the 3 days were up I pretended that I was really dead, even though I wasn’t. My throat burned and I knew from my classes of mythology with Annabeth that the only way to get rid of it or at leads bring the burning sensation down. I didn’t want them to see me like this, so faked my death, sort of. I kept running until I stopped to hunt in forks Washington, at least that’s what the sign said. Anyway as I was hunting a herd of deer (because I don’t want to be a monster and feed on humans). Then I saw them, they called themselves the Cullen’s. They said that like me, they didn’t hunt humans. They offered for me to live with them, I accepted and now here I am, in my room in trying to get my niece Renesmee to sleep. She only ever sleeps when she with her dad, Edward Cullen, her mom (Bella Cullen) and of course me. When she finally went to sleep, I stared to think about who it was that bit me. I knew who it was after I told the Cullen’s; they said that it was one of the Volturi guards, they didn’t know who, but it was them. Then I started to think about my old life, and the people that I miss; my dad, my friends at camp, my mom but strangely the person I miss the most, I never thought I would. I hope I didn’t fall for her, her name is.........
hope you like it pls tell me if it was good or not thx
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