The Heroes of Olympus Mark of Athena Fanfic, Rainbow Style

rainbow_goddess posted on Jun 27, 2012 at 08:58AM
Annabeth
Annabeth leaned over the edge. Her heart pounded. She was finally going to see her boyfriend, Percy Jackson, after eight long months. Most of the senior campers from Camp Half-Blood came along. Leo Valdz steering the Argo II. Out of the corner of her eyes, she saw Jason Grace and Piper McLean holding hands, talking. She hoped that the video Leo sent would let the Romans know that they weren't the enemy. But after watching Leo talk, she started to think that instead of helping them, Leo would get them killed in painful, nasty ways.
Piper and Jason came up next to her. Annabeth looked at them. "What do you think will happen?" she whispered.
Jason gazed into space. "I don't know."
Suddenly, a cloud parted and what Annabeth saw nearly gave her a heart attack. Camp Jupiter. The landscape displayed below her was beautiful. The hills were green. The Roman style temples and buildings were unbelievable. Her mouth hung open.
Leo's voice echoed through the speekers. "Attention everyone. We have arrived in Camp Jupiter. And they have spotted us. Jason, please kindly wave so that the Romans know that you are with us."
Annabeth sighed. Leo had the wierdest mind of them all. Piper and Jason rolled their eyes.
Below them, a large crowd of people stood, screaming and shouting. Then as the Argo II got closer, Annabeth saw that most of them carried weapons. Uh-oh, Annabeth thought.
"Leo!" Jason suddenly yelled. "You're going to land in the forum! Move to the left!"
Leo obeyed. Romans ran to meet them. Annabeth scanned the crowds, hoping to see Percy. Then she saw him. He had his arms around a girl with curly brown hair, who was about thirteen or fourteen, and a large bulky guy. The guy looked around sixteen.
"PERCY!!!!!!!!" she screamed. Percy dropped his arms and their eyes met.
"Annabeth!!" Percy cried.
Annabeth leaped off even before the ship landed. The Romans made way for her. She could feel tears streaming down as she ran. She tackled Percy and leaped into his arms. It felt so good to be wrapped in his powerful, strong arms. She felt so safe in his grasp that she didn't want to let go. But Percy pulled back and looked into her eyes with those beautiful sea green eyes that Annabeth haven't seen in such a long time.
"I've missed you, Wise Girl," Percy whispered.
"I've missed you too, Seaweed Brain," Annabeth said. She looked up and saw that there were tears in his eyes too.
Percy pulled her back into his arms and kissed her. A real kiss on the lips. They stood there for such a long time that Annabeth didn't realize that everyone was watching, until whoops and applause filled the air. Annabeth felt her face turn burning hot.
Percy gripped her hand. "Come on. Follow me. There's someone I want you to meet." He pulled her along, until they were standing in front of Jason, Leo, and Piper. They were talking with the two kids Percy had his arms around of before and another girl, who looked about fifteen. She had long black hair, and dark, intense brown eyes.
"Annabeth," Percy said. "Meet Hazel Levesque, daughter of Pluto." He pointed to the girl with curly brown. Annabeth saw that her eye were gold, like a 14-karat gold peice.
Annabeth managed a faint "hi". Hazel nodded and smiled warmly.
"This is Frank Zhang," Percy introduced. He nodded to the big, bulky boy. "He's a son of Mars. And my distant, ah, very distant half brother. Frank is probably the only nice child of the war god."
Frank blushed. Annabeth smiled. She realized that Frank had a strange combination of a strong man, and a pudgy babyish face.
Percy pointed to the other girl, who was talking to Jason. "That's Reyna, daughter of Bellona, the war goddess. She's the praetor of this legion."
Jason turned to Percy. "You replaced me?"
Annabeth had no idea what Jason was talking about. But Percy looked down and shuffled his feet nervously. "I didn't want to. But the legion insisted. And Reyna," he added nervously.
Jason's eyes were dangerous and threatening. Piper touched his shoulder. "It's all right. We'll figure this out."
Annbeth introduced Jason, Piper, and Leo, to Hazel and Frank. Hazel stared at Leo. "You're Sammy."
"What?" Annabeth asked. The others looked euqually confused. Leo stared at Hazel as if she had popped out from his nightmare.
Percy was about to explain when Reyna interrupted. "We'll talk about this at the meeting." She raised her voice and shouted. "Senators and Greeks. Meet me in the Senate House."
Annbeth looked at Percy questioningly. "Just follow me," he said.
All the others from Camp Half-Blood joined up with them. Percy turned back and announced, "Everyone. Listen up. No weapons allowed, so you're gonna have to take them out. You'll get them back, but we don't want the meeting to get bloody."
They marched to the city. The statue, Terminus, made sure all the weapons were placed safely on the metal tray.
They arrived at the Senate House right on time. Percy took the seat next to Reyna at the head. Jason kept giving Percy a murderous look. Percy looked very uncomforatable, because Reyna kept taking hold of his hand. Annabeth felt a strong pulse of jelousy rippling inside her.
Reyna stood. "Jason, I would like to hear your story. From the very beginning. Then Percy will tell you his. Then, we must discuss the problem that our long lost praetor, Jason, has come back, and Percy has just recently been raised at the second praetor. But that'll be for later. Jason, you may begin."
Jason stood and took a deep breath. Then he began.

This is my first fanfic, so i hope that you all like it. and i would LOVE comments. they dont hafta be positive. but keep them constructive. enjoy!
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over a year ago mechdemigod said…
wink
Ok I can wait 4 a couple of days
over a year ago mechdemigod said…
Do you guys even post on weekdays?
over a year ago cinnominbubble said…
I wish! My phone doesn't have Internet. I'm using my moms. I know the password>:)
over a year ago rainbow_girl said…
tongue
So i have the next few chappies in mind already, but i just need to find time to write and post...
Sigh, my life is soooo hectic, so dont be surprised if i dont appear for several days.
over a year ago cinnominbubble said…
Yayz
over a year ago cinnominbubble said…
I is confuzzled now...
over a year ago mechdemigod said…
cake
post new chappie please.if you do it I will give u cake
over a year ago cinnominbubble said…
Cake
Yum
Pie
YUM
Cake
Yum
Pie
YUM
rainbow_girl commented…
ummmm..... i dunno if i would want to eat THAT cake. if it was real, then i would eat it. but im not really fond of cotton like satyrs... over a year ago
mechdemigod commented…
agreed over a year ago
over a year ago mechdemigod said…
smile
i love mostly all desserts. Is that pie knit? If so nice job to whoever did it
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agamotto commented…
I think it is knit, crochet looks different, and you can't make stitches like on the top with crochet. Also, I think it's a poly/cotton blend. over a year ago
over a year ago mechdemigod said…
wink
I'm going on a camping trip with my boy scout Troop so I wont be here until Sunday
over a year ago mechdemigod said…
laugh
im back
over a year ago cinnominbubble said…
I posted a knitted pie? I just looked up "blue Pie"
over a year ago mechdemigod said…
sad
hello anybody?
over a year ago cinnominbubble said…
Hiz!
over a year ago mechdemigod said…
laugh
Yay someones here
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over a year ago cinnominbubble said…
YUP!
over a year ago rainbow_girl said…
heart
hey guys! im really glad that u guys r wtill here, but sadly, im gonna hafta close this forum for good. my parents complain that i spend too much writing fanfictions. so im gonna stop this one.
@mechdemigod: i am co-writers for 2 other forums, Camp Half-Blood and Camp Jupiter read the Percy Jackson series, started by kayleegurule, and Masters of the Comb and Keeper, started by snowflakes
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over a year ago agamotto said…
crying
Bother and bagora! I was hoping for more. But if you have to, you have to.
over a year ago mechdemigod said…
crying
waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
over a year ago mechdemigod said…
smile
Rainbow I have 2last requests. Can cinnamonbubble and I continue the fanfic. And 2 can you give me your email so you can give us ideas? I will post on those other fanfics you mentioned
over a year ago rainbow_girl said…
wink
sure! no problem! why dont u just message me on fanpop?
over a year ago cinnominbubble said…
Ok!! But I might not be on that often... I stole the iPad now *gasp* I'm planning on writing a new story on Harry Potters grand-daughter, Isabella.
over a year ago mechdemigod said…
cake
Yyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhh­hhh­hoo­ooo­ooo­ooo­ooo­ooo­!!!­!!!­!!!­!!!­!!!­!!!­!!!­cak­e4a­ll!­!
over a year ago mechdemigod said…
hello?
over a year ago mechdemigod said…
Annabeth
Why did frank look so strange right then? And why did she feel that chill down her back? Then some sort of spike flew past her shoulder and she whirled around.Dr thorn? "No, said the golden eyed manticore behind her. I am a eildion possessing frank Zhang. Earth mother promised I would live again in this body. At that point annabeth was already on deck yelling "everyone on deck"! Fortunately, they got on deck quick enough. All but Leo and piper."Hazel, where's Leo and piper"! They're cornered by frank! ( Leo speaking) hey piper, if we're gonna die right here, he said while backing into the wall, we might as well do this.Then they kissed on the lips.
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over a year ago mechdemigod said…
smile
hope you guys like my first chappie!
over a year ago LeoNicoCrazaiii said…
big smile
okayyy first
wht the heck?!?! JASPER! NO LIPER! THTS JUST SAD- MAKING!
and second . . . it's good . . . i just need someone to refresh my mind so anyone up for a tiny summary for harmony?
oh and the 'v' thing was a one direction phase i was going through . . . srry!
over a year ago mechdemigod said…
smile
i'm up for the summary
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over a year ago mechdemigod said…
Ralph killed this forum. BAD RALPH,BAD!!!!!!!!!!!!
over a year ago olympianglory said…
So, I was reading this forum and would like to see if anyone posts on it. It's a really good story, and I think someone should take over.