The Heroes of Olympus Banished

Thalia67 posted on Nov 02, 2011 at 11:24PM
So I have seen a few stories like this, and I wanted to do my own take on it. I'm basically just going to start with the same idea, but do it different in a lot of ways. Not copying or anything.

Anyway, the basic plot is that the gods wrongly accuse Percy of a crime, and its about his time afterwards.

I'll post right after this. Please comment and tell me what you think! If I don't get a few comments after each post, I probably will stop posting.

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over a year ago Thalia67 said…
haha thanks guys:) the challenges were really easy to come up with actually. once i got what each of their fatal flaws were, then it was pretty easy. By the way, what did you think each fatal flaw was for them? I'll post 2 chapters tonight if anyone can get them all right!
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over a year ago demigods4ever said…
please post
over a year ago Thalia67 said…
Here ya go guys! I haven't finished with the results, so I'll try and post the rest tomorrow before I leave, but no guarantees:P

Jason

He knew what he had to do. And Percy was pretty darn clever for thinking up this challenge. If everyone else’s challenge was like this, they would be in big trouble. Not everyone could do what he was about to do, though he hoped that they would. Mostly for the sake of the world.

He kneeled down on the ground and looked up to the sky. “I give my life to save all of them. I know that there is no way I choose any one of them to save, so instead, I will sacrifice my own life to let each of them live,” Jason announced. Without a moment’s waste, Percy appeared with a loud crash of a wave.

He was smiling, which was a good sign. Percy motioned for Jason to get up, but didn’t wait for him before he started talking. “Jason Grace, god of storms, son of Zeus and brother of Thalia, this test was very hard. I knew it had to be, because you are a great opponent and very powerful. I’m glad that you have passed your test. And no, I will not be going through with my threat. I could never kill these people, even if I am angry at many of them. Now come, let’s watch the others finish their challenges,” Percy said. Jason couldn’t believe the change in him. When he had last seen him, he had been this kid who always wanted to joke around and have fun and didn’t seem to be able to make any responsible choice by thinking it through. But now, it was a different story. He had an aura of power and leadership about him.


Piper

With her friends in danger of drowning sand by the chains, Piper didn’t think about things twice. She took the chains and locked them around herself. When she was done with this, she sighed and started talking. “I have thought this through, and my friends are in danger. I know that I can’t do anything without just saving one or two, and I can’t let them die. I figure this is the only way to save them, and I’m willing to drown for them all, and sacrifice myself,” Piper said closing her eyes. She tossed the key away for good measure.

A loud crash resonated through her ears, and when she opened her eyes, Percy was standing there along with Jason. “Piper McLean, goddess of natural beauty and true love, you have passed your test. Not only did you think things through, you based your choice on what was logical and emotional, making the best choice for everyone else. I’m glad to have you pass, Piper,” Percy said smiling. She glanced at Jason and he nodded. The chains fell off of her wrists and she immediately ran to Jason and pulled him into a tight hug. Still in that position, they disappeared into thin air to check on the others.


Thalia

She still gripped Luke’s hand as she bent towards the pond. This was her challenge and she would own it. Especially if it meant that she would see Luke as his old self once again.

Bessie was still the same, even a thousand years later. Thalia knew that if she summoned it, a knife would appear in her hand. But that wasn’t the choice she had to make. She would take down Gaea with her friends, and not by herself. She had enough power as it was. So instead of killing it, Thalia bent down and rubbed her hand over the creatures skin.

“I’m glad you made this choice, Thalia,” sounded a voice. At first, Thalia thought it was still Luke, but when she turned around it was Percy. He was smiling down at her, and she knew that he had forgiven her and knew that she felt awful about her choice. Without thinking, Thalia got up and pulled Percy into a tight hug and wouldn’t let go. He didn’t hug back at first, but after a few seconds she felt her friend’s arms tighten around her. “I’m glad your back, Thals. You passed, even being the goddess of power, you resisted the temptation of more power.”
over a year ago swimmergirl7 said…
OMG!!! that was awesome. I was wondering when u would tell us what happened at the end.
over a year ago hollistergurl said…
WOAAHH AMAZING CHAPTER!!!! yay people passed :) post soon!!
over a year ago demigods4ever said…
Awesome PLEASE POST SOON!!!
over a year ago jjspecht said…
angelic
post please
over a year ago swimmergirl7 said…
Post soon!
over a year ago demigods4ever said…
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over a year ago swimmergirl7 said…
Pretty post soon!
over a year ago goddessgirl said…
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you are an amazing writer! post more!
over a year ago Kaia143 said…
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Please post soon!!!!!!!!! Its really goo!!!!!!!
over a year ago swimmergirl7 said…
Post soon!
over a year ago Thalia67 said…
sorry i haven't posted...I've been doing a lot in the last two days...but I'll try and post tonight!
over a year ago hollistergurl said…
okay post soon :) take your time :)
over a year ago number1pjfan said…
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Yay! Please post soon. So far so good, they decided to save the others not themselves but I bet annabeths was hardest and she fails, but since Percy made up with the rest of them he still talks. Where's Nico?!
over a year ago Kaia143 said…
Please post soon!!!!!
over a year ago demigods4ever said…
POST SOON!!
over a year ago Thalia67 said…
Hey sorry its been a while! I wrote as fast as I could guys:P Well, here ya go! Now lets try and get this on the popular content list hmm? Thats my goal:)

Demetry

Demetry set his sword down. He couldn’t kill them. Oh sure, he might want to, but it was the challenge. Percy obviously knew what his desires were and what his fatal flaw was. It wouldn’t take much to figure out. Anyone could.

Percy, Nico, Thalia, Piper, and Jason were all suddenly standing in front of him. Them, along with some unknown person. They weren’t smiling, but Percy did nod at him. Not that it mattered to Demetry if he had his approval or not. All this was about was passing the test.

“Demetry, god of anger and vengeance, you have passed the test. I’m glad you made the right choice, even if your reasons were not…well, not what I would have hoped. But I will hope you can still change,” Percy said. Nico looked like he was going to cut off Demetry’s head. Not that he would give him the chance. He knew better than that. They were much better swordsmen than they were a thousand years ago.



Leo

He glanced back at the card table, and everyone stared back at him. He had played poker only a few times before, and those were very low stakes. But in this high stakes game, worth the lives of millions, he had bet everything. He could have lost. But no. Leo had won out. The last and final card had been a jack. The pot was his.

But Leo didn’t care about that. He cared about saving all of his friends. And his family too. He had almost given up. But he had stuck out, and it had been useful. He had overcome his fatal flaw.

Leo walked out of the casino, and found most of his friends waiting for him. Percy was at the front, smiling broadly at him. Just seeing that smile made Leo realize how much he had missed his friend. They hadn’t been really close, but there were things that both of them could relate to.

“Leo, god of machinery, you have passed my test. And you won a bunch of money back there too. That was a real game, with some minor tampering on my part. They won’t be happy,” Percy said. Leo gave him a one arm hug, along with Nico. Now, Nico was one person he had been really good friends with. There was something about him that he had just liked. Yes, he may be a little creepy at times. But he was a good guy. And he was glad to have him back as a friend.



Reyna

She looked each of her workers in the eyes. When Reyna stood up, the others looked shocked, as if she couldn’t stand. They opened their mouths to talk, but when she held up her hand the immediately quieted. Wow, she was going to miss this.

“I officially resign from being the President of the United States. Give my power to the Vice President immediately. I don’t have the knowledge to make these kind of decisions,” Reyna said, her voice displaying power. They all gasped at the same time, but after that sound, she heard no more of it. The scene disappeared and she was back in the same forest she had been before.

Percy was standing there. The others were there as well, but Percy was really the only one she noticed. He smiled, and she about melted, which wasn’t like her. But it was just so great to see him not mad at her for once.

“You passed, Reyna, goddess of leaders. I’m so glad you passed,” he said. Percy pulled her into a hug and she sighed inwards. This was definitely forgiveness of the best kind.



Frank

The voices were just so loud in his mind. But he knew he had to push through. It was the only choice, really. His friends were waiting for him, and he just knew they were going to pass. There was only him. And a choice.

And his was going to be a tough one, but Frank knew what he had to do. It was his choice, and he would do the right thing. He could persevere through the pain in his head. Frank uncurled from his ball, and started moving. He had to just keep moving. How he did it, he didn’t know. He pushed with his arms, legs and mind, and eventually he saw a difference in scenery. There was a speck of light that kept getting bigger. It was a doorway, he could see. And after what seemed like hours, he made his way through it, and found solid ground once again.

There were all of his friends, except for Annabeth. Percy was hugging Reyna and turned around after they released. He seemed uneasy, but also happy. Frank smiled from ear to ear at him, and after a moment Percy returned the smile. There was his best friend. The one who he had learned to trust over their first quest. He walked over to stand in front of Percy, and hugged him tightly, like a long lost friend, since he was.

“You passed, my friend. Frank, god of shapes, one of my very best friends, you passed. Not that I had any doubt. Although, I wonder why you didn’t change shapes to fly forward, but then again, you never do make sense,” Percy said laughing. Frank laughed with him for the first time in a thousand years.



Annabeth

The sky was clear, as if nothing was wrong. But her friends were dying. And she had no way to fix it. “Percy, I can’t do it. Don’t let them die. Help me. I can’t fix this. I can’t fix what I did, no matter how hard I try. I’m so, so sorry, Percy. Please forgive me,” Annabeth wept. She dropped her head into her hands.

Suddenly there were hands on her shoulders. They pulled her up, and before she knew it, Annabeth was pulled into a hug. The arms around her were strong, and after a few seconds, she recognized the smell. It was only one person.

“Annabeth, I forgive you. I was mad for a time, but I could never give up on you. And while I might not still feel the same for you, you will always be my closest friend,” Percy said. Sure, that hurt, but still at least he considered her a friend. Maybe she could work her way back up to where they had been. He let her go, and stepped back.

The smile on his face was very wide. “You have all passed, with the last being Annabeth, goddess of thoughts. Though, you are all forgiven, you are all not trusted yet. There are some things that you will have to earn. And I have the perfect place for us to figure out the next step,” Percy said. Nico smiled at that and he pulled Percy aside to talk about something. If only Annabeth could hear their thoughts and tell what they were thinking. But there was some kind of wall guarding their thoughts. It was so unusual and it unnerved her.

“So where are we going?” asked Leo. After this challenge, Annabeth needed a good nights sleep, so she hoped they could do that at this place.

“Our home,” Nico said when he turned back to them. Percy smiled and chuckled at their perplexed expressions.
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over a year ago swimmergirl7 said…
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Awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Amazing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I luv it!!!!!!!!:):)
over a year ago AceJackson said…
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over a year ago demigods4ever said…
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PLEASE POST !!!!!! this story is sooooo good!!
over a year ago Kaia143 said…
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Yes please post!! This story is soooooooooooooo good!
over a year ago hollistergurl said…
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OMG AMAZING!!! THEY ALL PASSED! YAAYYY! POST SOON!!!
over a year ago number1pjfan said…
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That was a great chapter! Reyna and Percy should definatly get together! Thanks for posting! Leo's challenge was the funniest, Thalia's had the weirdest (she pets him, really?) , and Demetris was the most disappointing. Why do they hug everyone though? Would you mind puttind what they're god of? I know one of Percy's challenges but... Good job!
over a year ago hollistergurl said…
I don't like Demetry either. Please kill him? lol jk :D I really hope your forum goes on the popular content, cuz this is AMAZING! post soon :D
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over a year ago hollistergurl said…
ooh new page!
over a year ago number1pjfan said…
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It probably will... After all, it's AMZING!!!!!!!!!
over a year ago Thalia67 said…
you guys are great:P so, yeah, they hug everyone. what do you do when your emotional? hug, duh!:) but trust me, I have some twists and turns up ahead. Someone might be getting killed off, just haven't figured out who though, someone might be getting their god status stripped, and your going to meet someone's child eventually. Oh, here are what they are god or goddess of:

Annabeth - Thoughts
Frank - Shapes
Reyna - Leaders
Leo - Machinery
Demetry - Anger and Vengeance
Thalia - Power
Piper - Natural Beauty and True Love
Jason - Storms

If you guys need to know anything else, I'll post tomorrow, so just let me know:P Also, if you guys have any ideas let me know...or any ideas on whats going to happen next.
over a year ago number1pjfan said…
What are Percy and Nico?! We know they are powerful, but how powerful?!?!?!?!?!?!
over a year ago Thalia67 said…
hmm...guess you'll have to figure it out later...you don't think I would give it to you this early do you!:P I gotta keep you guys hooked somehow:)
over a year ago number1pjfan said…
Dang it! I thought it would be something like that when I saw you avoided it the 1st time but I didn t figure out your be that evil... I like how you made their powers different than normal
over a year ago swimmergirl7 said…
Post soon!!! We know that Percy at the very least is god of challenges. So...
over a year ago jjspecht said…
angelic
post please
over a year ago swimmergirl7 said…
cool
Post soon!!
over a year ago number1pjfan said…
Ya, and probably something to do do with water and time...
over a year ago demigods4ever said…
POST!!
over a year ago hollistergurl said…
post soon! :D
over a year ago Kaia143 said…
Post soon!! Please!!
over a year ago swimmergirl7 said…
Pretty plz! The suspense is killing me!!
over a year ago number1pjfan said…
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Post! I'm glad Demetrius and Percy didn't hug though...
over a year ago Kaia143 said…
Plz post!!!!
over a year ago hollistergurl said…
lol I agree with number1pjfan, I'm glad they didn't hug! That would be... awkward. Lol, post soon! :D
over a year ago number1pjfan said…
Yeah. Post!
over a year ago percabeth-bcz7 said…
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i just started reading now... and its AWESOME!! post soon!!
over a year ago number1pjfan said…
What do you guys think he will be god of? Nico?
over a year ago Kaia143 said…
Shadows
over a year ago hollistergurl said…
post soon! :D
over a year ago swimmergirl7 said…
Post soon!!
over a year ago goddessgirl said…
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this is so good! post soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!