hope y'all like it!!!!!

i did!

It's very good

thnx to all of my readers and supporters y'all are the onez who give me spirit to do this stuff.

one question.....zakittle why do you have a frowning face??? did you not like it or something???

Accident

ok
just wonderin

hey sorry i cant post right now....i had to go home early from school yesterday,i havent been able to write the chapter,i have a sinus infection,and every time i stand up my head starts spinning and i feel terrible!!!!!PLUS ADD FIVE PAGES OF HOMEWORK!!! UGH!! I'M SOOO SORRY!!! forgive me!!

y'all i NEED IDEAS!!!

sorry your sick i hope u feel better

who are u gonna make win?

who should win??? Greeks or Romans??

thnx demigods4ever!! i am sort of gettin better y'all are sweet!!

BORED

Neither of them should win, if 1 side won that would be the complete opposite of getting them to join forces. You should let the battle go halfway with the greeks starting to win, then something REALLY serious would cause the fighting to stop and you should take it on from there. Hope that helps!! Ur an awesome writer!

thankz! i was just thinkin about the battle!! songster909 i think u can read peoples minds!!

chapter 4 : percy 2

After my little talk with Reyna i decided to go down to the Fields of Mars. Sure enough there was people already ready for the battle. Annabeth was already there.When she saw me she asked,"Percy why aren't you ready for the battle?"
"Reyna just informed me that I can't fight because I have to watch the battle."

"Oh."she said it like she was sad.
Before I could answer her,Reyna walked up and said,"Percy it's time for the battle to start."
I said,"ok..good luck Annabeth"
She smiled.and said,"I don't need luck Seaweed Brain."
I got on Blackjack and announced that the battle is about to start.After every camper was there Reyna and I said at the same time,"Fight!"

The battle started as soon as we said the word.The Romans were doing great.They started out strong.When you pick out all the Greeks,it looks like they don't stand a chance.I looked around from the sky view and saw Octavian was taking on Annabeth.He looked really scared,too.I laughed at the thought of Octavian being scared of Annabeth.Just before I thought the Greeks were going to lose,they started to bring their game.
The Romans were losing.Annabeth had Octavian pinned down to the ground with one foot and she was still fighting off other Romans that were trying to get her off of Octavian.Hazel was going against Piper.They were each others equal.Jason was fighting on the Romans side.He was having trouble fighting Leo.Of all people! Leo kept going up in flames setting Jason's sword on fire.The fight was going great.
Suddenly a loud rumble shook the fight.Every body stopped fighting.Even Annabeth had let Octavian get up.Reyna and I exchanged worried glances.Then when things couldn't have gotten any weirder,the Amazons and Hunters came out of the woods.
Just then a huge bright flash filled the field.Everybody averted their eyes.


the other half will be posted soon keep reading ill keep postin'

The battle was progressing to fast other than that it was good.

ik it wasn't meant to be that way

post later!!

hello people

rest of chapter 4:


Percy 2:

The flash got hotter and hotter.Finally it stopped,we took away our hands to see,none other than,Gaea......Wait a sec. it wasn't Gaea it was ZEUS!!! WHY Zeus was here,I don't know.When we realized who it was we all bowed to the king of gods.

Zeus boomed,"STAND UP DEMIGODS!I AM HERE TO SEE THE SEVEN!"
"But we don't know who the seven are!"said one of the demigods.They must have been brave.
"FINE I WILL TELL YOU.THE SEVEN ARE PERCY JACKSON,ANNABETH CHASE,HAZEL LEVESQUE,FRANK ZHANG,PIPER MCLEAN,JASON GRACE,AND LEO VALDEZ.EVERYBODY ELSE LEAVE!"

As soon as Zeus said leave everybody scampered away.Only the seven were left.


the NEXT will be posted SOON.I am bout to crash...POST.

post post post!!!

post soon this is GREAT!

should i add a new character?

no keep all the old characters

ok i was just thinkin if i should add one new character.(i was gonna keep all the old characters to.)I was seein if y'all would want me to

i new and ur story is amazin
post soon!!!!

THNX beba157jello u rock!!!!!

post soon

I MEANT TO SAY THAT THE NEXT CHAPTER WILL BE POSTED SOON!

BE A WAITIN' FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER!

okkay plizz poost soon !!!1
:):)

I WILL STUPID WEATHER AND SCHOOL!! I WILL GET MY REVENGE!(*over done*)I SWEAR ON THE RIVER STYX! (* thunder and lighting booms sealing the swear*) SORRY I HAVEN'T POSTED! I AM SOOOO SORRY!!! I SWEAR ON THE RIVER STYX!

can't wait !!!remember you sweared on
the river styx so u can't break the promise......
or who knws wat will happen 2 u :0 post soon though

POST!!!

I am tryin' my school is hounding me!!!!!! I am so sorry guys. I mean I am so so so so so so so so very very very very sorry I can't post!!! Don't hate me!PLEASE????? PLEASE DON'T HATE ME?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?! I really am trying. DON'T JUDGE ME EITHER,PLEASE??????!!!!!?!?!?

It's ok. You're still an amazing writer. I could never do this. Post soon.

swimmergirl7 is right; Your awesome and it's really hard to do this. You try your best and when you have time you can post. We'll just be patient with it. :) Btw: I don't think anybody hates you ;)

school comes first just post when you have time

okay thanks so much for your comments!!!! they are all really nice and sweet!!! I'll try to post in the next week or so!!!!

Ok. Post soon.

post!

Hey, that was an awesome chapter 4, and thx for the compliment. I actually just had my parent teacher conference today, and apparently, my writing and reading grades are above my grade standard!On the other hand: sympathy. I feel sad for you that ur place has bad weather. For me, the forecast calls for a hailstorm of studying

i agree with swimmergirl7 too!!!
you really awesome and post soon!!!when you can!!!!

songster909 that is so awesome for you(not the weather)....thanks beba157jello...i am a trying though!

this is just off the top of my head...i left my notes at school..:)(:

Chapter 5:
Annabeth

I have to admit one thing.That one thing is:I am TERRIFIED! Zeus is here in person talking to the seven of the great prophecy. There was no witnesses if he hurts us..I better watch out.

Anyways,here is our conversation with Zeus:(Zeus's words are all big!)
Zeus:"SO,THIS IS THE SEVEN DEMIGODS WHO ARE GOING TO DEFEAT GAEA.YOU DON'T LOOK LIKE MUCH BUT YOU WILL DO."
I said,"ya thanks for the compliment."I only said it so I could hear it though.
Zeus,"ANYWAYS BACK TO BUSINESS.AS YOU ALL KNOW GAEA IS RISING.YOU ARE THE CHOSEN ONES WHO HAVE TO SAVE OLYMPUS,AGAIN! NO MATTER HOW MUCH I HATE DEMIGODS,I WANT TO WISH YOU GOOD LUCK."
Percy said,"Ya thanks I feel so loved."
ZEUS SAID,"WATCH IT PERCY JACKSON! YOU DO NOT W3ANT A GOD AS AN ENEMY.ANYWAYS,GOOD LUCK."
With that Zeus flashed back to Olympus leaving behind an awkward silence.
"well,that was....awkward."i said.
" very."agreed the rest including Percy all at once."

After Zeus left,Percy,Hazel,Frank,Leo,Piper,Jason,and me walked back to toward the cabins.


The rest will be posted later.this was all i could think of and have time for!!! sorry to keep y'all waiting

Ok thank you for pOsting!!!!! I wasn't expecting anything till next week!

I KNOW ME TO!! IT SURPRISED ME THAT I JUST NOW THOUGHT OF THAT!!!!! THE NEXT THING I KNOW IT'S POSTED!! WOW CREEPY!!! I AM A GEEK!!!!!!

IF I DECIDED TO ADD A NEW CHARACTER:WHAT SHOULD THERE NAME BE,BOY OR GIRL,GODLY PARENT,ROMAN OR GREEK OR BOTH?? ANYTHING ELSE YOU CAN THINK OF...DON'T WORRY I MIGHT NOT ADD A NEW CHARACTER!! IT'S JUST AN IDEA!!!!!!